The place sounds mysterious,the people around me look scary I don’t know where I’m going,I’m just walking down a path that don’t stop.All you could hear was the sound of wind blowing on the back of my head the blazing sun was shinning as bright as a lightbulb in a dark room.
June 21, 2015 at 8:16 pm
Jomay, I think you need to look at how you have formatted this. The first line in a Sonnet needs to have a capital letter, and it needs to be laid out so that the reader can clearly see the fourteen lines.
You have made a clear effort to use an ABAB rhyme scheme here which is excellent.